It's not allowed me to fully enjoy the story and after writing this review has soured my taste for this story even more. I was a patron of this story - stopped because I read slowly, and Defier writes unbelievably fast. And what kind of knife, a damn kitchen knife?! Voici présenté ici le premier effort de ce jeune groupe Lyonnais Edge Of The Fall, formé en fin 2008 sur les cendres de différents groupes (KLOZECORE, NOWAYOUT, SONS OF SATURN, NO CURE, NO GOOD MEN, SILLY TWATS…). The rest are left to deal with the invaders. Defiance of the Fall is an enjoyable post apocalypse story that has, I think, a good mix of seriousness and fun. Seemingly forgotten by the System, Zac found himself stuck in the wilderness surrounded by deadly beasts. So kudos for that!
It has a few decent plot twists, and passably good worldbuilding too, I doubt you'll be head over heels for the story but I also doubt you'll hate it, unless you're super picky. A universe where all races and civilzations fought for power and dominion. Those are some of the things I like about the story, so far I only have a couple minor negative things to mention, *Edit: new complaints added here as the story continues*. Is this the same gamer nerd or some ninja from Naruto. Let us know what’s wrong with this preview of, Published He was pretty sure they were fake, but he didn’t want to keep them in the camp on the off-chance their function was tracking their location." The story started to take a dive in quality when the MC made poor judgements and out of character decisions and the author started to handwave details too big to ignore. 2019 Did the MC not realize if the bracers could have location tracking, then every single item from the demons could also? The MC is one of those that were left. This is now my favorite. Things constantly keep escalating and because of that the characters, their characterization, and the world building start to fall by the wayside.
Second of all, when the hell did he learn to throw knives? Forester's Constitution (Class): Fight in the forests, be one with nature. Start by marking “Defiance of the Fall” as Want to Read: Error rating book. Can he keep the crystal in his underwear or in his shoes? I have never on this site seen another author that's as consistent in his publishing rates as this one. He starts human, weak and naive. Or just pour the entire 100 all over his naked body while he lies on the ground, imagine how many levels he can gain. So is he overpowered? To make matters worse he starts off in the exact spot that a monster is going to spawn and has to roll the dice for his life. ), but it's usually a fairly safe bet that a rank D warrior will not be able to defeat a rank C one with exceptions (exceptions like plot shields and overpowered daos!). The grammar is great, few errors, allow the reader to stay immersed in the story. But it's objectively not great due to some glaring and easy to fix issues. And 39.). being in a grade (D) baby world, while there are still grade (B) old monsters and many more in the infinitely vast multi-verse, waiting for their appearance. He has to survive by the skin of his teeth, he'd die on a daily basis if he didn't have the system giving him a 'sleep and your fatal injuries will be healed' trope. I liked it when it was less exposition and more show and feel at the beginning, but I guess the Author have to rely on the ol' reliable wall of text.
A universe where all races and civilizations fought for power and dominion. Does not fell lile the MC has to struggle all that much. The problems I had with the story are pretty spoilery, so I wouldn't recommend clicking it if you're a new reader. Let's not even touch on the characters or plot and their problems. Having it in one of his hands was too unwieldy, and slowed down his progress on the meat considerably. Biggest bummer is his fighting style devolves into "I hit the other guy harder, so I won". All it takes is ctrl + f at the end of a chapter and editing it out. The sword, the axe he's using now, the spatial bag, the armor, the clothes? There's a few interesting characters spread around in the novel, and you might actually be able to feel invested in some characters (hopefully at least the protagonist), but I doubt you'll be singing the author praises for good characters. The author basically hands the protagonist everything he needs on a silver platter like in most stories like these, what he has not done however is give him anything more than what he needs, he's given him exactly the bare minimum and nothing more and I like that. Seemingly forgotten by the System, Zac found himself stuck in the wilderness surrounded by deadly beasts. Right away we see our MC about to die but survived due to his devil-rigged luck.
This was my gripe with the story, the pacing feels like it's snailing along because sometimes entire chapters are devoted to just seemingly meaningless exposition. I'm still reading, obviously, but I'm definitely less enthused, and my earlier review may create unrealistic expectations. Hell the last chapter I read (37) was one such chapter (edit: and 38 was the same. I went more in detail about it in my review on chapter 24 if you'd like my complete thoughts on it, but to summarize it, it was an out of character decision and seemed like a forced choice from the author. But it could use some work and a good polish. The whole planet was introduced to the so-called multi-verse by an unfeeling System or God. Definetily worth to read if you have nothing important to do. When I wrote this review, the story was around chapter 35. Throughout the entire fight of chapter 27 and 28, the author wouldn't stop talking about how strong and tenacious the MC is, but when the fight is over and the MC has to go collect the gear, he's all of a sudden weak and not capable of carrying all the loot away. I really like this story. Chpt75 [Forester's Constitution - Proficiency: Early. TLDR; Do you like IET? If you need a litrpg fix and have run out of stuff to read? Be the first to ask a question about Defiance of the Fall.
This issue has been brought up. He's still a grade (F), later (E) after snatching Fruit of Ascencion. by RoyalRoad. But hey I really like mediocre stories far more than stories that have its ups and downs. Overall I think that once this is finished and we know where we're going a good editing pass would easily smooth out these issues and make this go from good to great.
The author blended a few elements of eastern fantasy books with western litrpg and it came out pretty well. Funny, but I had actually forgotten that character was even a part of the story to begin with. Or even having someone else edit each chapter. Both the explantion and execution are consistant and detailed. Man and Nature One Entity.
L.O.L. almost 400 chapters in. Most in this vein live or die based on the staying power of whatever unique twist they bring to the genre. Most in this vein live or die based on the staying power of whatever unique twist they bring to the genre. Or even wear it like a watch? This is a system that is supposed to favor the powerful, where if you are not a cultivator, you are trash. So it seems like the writing is never going to change regardless of how many people bring it up. If you're gonna be paranoid about something, it doesn't make sense to be half-paranoid about it. This gripe isn't about the loot, it's moreso how in battle the MC seems to have a 100 justifications to his strength and plot armor to give 1000%, but when it's out of battle all of a sudden he's incacable of doing anything beyond his means. I would advise the author to show more, and tell less. In chapter 32, we're shown many times the paranoia the MC has with anything demon related. Everyone except for the protagonist of course, he doesn't get a tutorial (lol). He sometimes goes down darker paths … Fighting foes that have unlocked cultivation and beats them, with only some minor ingenunity. Update: this story pretty quickly becomes your standard "Dao of Luck" xanxia fare, with the MC stumbling into treasures and powering up from near death experiences (that should have killed him). A universe where all races and civilizations fought for power and dominion. Good world building and leveling system. We see it unfolding through the eye of the Defiant, Zac. The litrpg aspect is interesting and sucks you in. First off, of course has to be the class choice. Get used to his Luck, however, since it won't go away for a while, perhaps ever. Defiance of the Fall is one of the few original English LitRPG genre books to absolutely nail the formula for me. With over 100 chapters now the story is different then when I reviewed in the beginning. The whole planet was introduced to the so-called multi-verse by an unfeeling System or God. As another review said, this story suffers a bit from lack of planning, but I somehow always end up coming back to it, I first dropped it at ch 36 or so, but then came back to it a good long while later when it had 100+ chapters.
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